Comments for M Blog http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo Just another Keeneweb.org weblog Tue, 02 Dec 2008 03:10:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on HW 33: Annotated Bibliography for Baghdad Burning by Tracy Mendham http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/04/02/hw-33-annotated-bibliography-for-baghdad-burning/#comment-14 Tracy Mendham Thu, 03 Apr 2008 14:20:34 +0000 http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/04/02/hw-33-annotated-bibliography-for-baghdad-burning/#comment-14 Excellent work on the HW 33 annotated bibliography--shows understand of the text, openness to the issues raised in it, and well written. I would just add the author's name to the beginning of the works cited entry: Riverbend. <em>Baghdad Burning</em>. New York: Feminist Press, 2005. Excellent work on the HW 33 annotated bibliography–shows understand of the text, openness to the issues raised in it, and well written.
I would just add the author’s name to the beginning of the works cited entry:
Riverbend. Baghdad Burning. New York: Feminist Press, 2005.

]]> Comment on HW 3: “Participatory Democracy” The future of politics by Tracy Mendham http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/03/hw-3-participatory-democracy-the-future-of-politics/#comment-12 Tracy Mendham Thu, 06 Mar 2008 15:48:08 +0000 http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/03/hw-3-participatory-democracy-the-future-of-politics/#comment-12 Nicely expressed. This is energetic, clear, crafted writing. Nicely expressed. This is energetic, clear, crafted writing.

]]> Comment on HW 2: Politics in blogging? Of Course! by Tracy Mendham http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/01/30/hw-2-politics-in-blogging-of-course/#comment-11 Tracy Mendham Thu, 06 Mar 2008 15:46:20 +0000 http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/01/30/hw-2-politics-in-blogging-of-course/#comment-11 Nice to see you really digesting and articulating the ideas in the chapter. Nice to see you really digesting and articulating the ideas in the chapter.

]]> Comment on HW 12: MacKinnon, reporter turned blogger by Tracy Mendham http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/18/hw-12-mackinnon-reporter-turned-blogger/#comment-10 Tracy Mendham Tue, 19 Feb 2008 15:12:30 +0000 http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/18/hw-12-mackinnon-reporter-turned-blogger/#comment-10 Yes, RConversation is kind of utilitarian, not flashy, but as you note, informative content seems to be the main point of her blog, and that it is rich in. Nice work. This meets all the requirements of the assignment. Yes, RConversation is kind of utilitarian, not flashy, but as you note, informative content seems to be the main point of her blog, and that it is rich in.
Nice work. This meets all the requirements of the assignment.

]]> Comment on HW 13: Homecoming queen gone bad by Tracy Mendham http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/18/hw-13-homecoming-queen-gone-bad/#comment-9 Tracy Mendham Tue, 19 Feb 2008 15:09:49 +0000 http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/18/hw-13-homecoming-queen-gone-bad/#comment-9 Well done; this meets all the requirements of the assignment. Well done; this meets all the requirements of the assignment.

]]> Comment on HW8: Parents should not monitor everything that their kid does by Tracy Mendham http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/11/hw8-parents-should-not-monitor-everything-that-their-kid-does/#comment-3 Tracy Mendham Tue, 12 Feb 2008 15:09:37 +0000 http://keeneweb.org/xoyankeesxo/2008/02/11/hw8-parents-should-not-monitor-everything-that-their-kid-does/#comment-3 Nice work making a clear argument here in HW 8, and as a reader I enjoyed hearing this positive view of children--that they're not always doing something bad. Your explanation /analysis of the quote ("...It show how many parents are scared...") worked nicely to avoid a dangling, hit and run quote. The introduction for the quote didn't make the connection as precisely but I can see you've got the idea. Your in-text citation was excellent. In writing a paper you would just need to remove the comma--it should be (Nussbaum 351), not (Nussbuam, 351). Your feeds in the sidebar are displaying perfectly. I don't see links to your pod or the blogs you're watching, though. I think you may need to go back to Presentation/Widgets and drag the Links widget back onto your sidebar. Nice work making a clear argument here in HW 8, and as a reader I enjoyed hearing this positive view of children–that they’re not always doing something bad. Your explanation /analysis of the quote (”…It show how many parents are scared…”) worked nicely to avoid a dangling, hit and run quote. The introduction for the quote didn’t make the connection as precisely but I can see you’ve got the idea.
Your in-text citation was excellent. In writing a paper you would just need to remove the comma–it should be (Nussbaum 351), not (Nussbuam, 351).

Your feeds in the sidebar are displaying perfectly. I don’t see links to your pod or the blogs you’re watching, though. I think you may need to go back to Presentation/Widgets and drag the Links widget back onto your sidebar.

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